I agree with the comments people left on my letter. To add strength to my arguement and to the content, i should have added a third example of why wiki is a good site. This would have added more evidence to back my claim and give the reader something more to base their beliefs on.
Despite the fact that i only had two support paragraphs i believe that my letter was formatted well and delivered a point that would convince most readers. Even though i agree with the fact that i could have added another support paragraph i believe that i touched one some of the KEY problems that circle the Wiki debate and that is why my letter was convincing.
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